From this feedback I have noticed that my feedback from Jack was very good and I didn't score a 1 which is not as good as most of the group in this respect for each individual section. From this I know that i need to improve my technical skills as this is something at which I feel I personally aswell as Jack thought i needed to improve on. Thusfore i have decided to create the magazine article from scratch. The rest of my feedback was very good and I was pleased that my group members noticed my contribution.